Writing the Reunion Romance
by MJ Frederick
I love reading reunion romances–the hero and heroine had a romantic connection when they were young, one of them did something stupid, and they come together years later, older and wiser.
Writing reunion romances is a whole different ball game. Yes, you have the instant connection built in there. Yes, you can get to intimacy that much quicker. BUT you have to have a strong enough reason for these two people who loved each other to walk away from each other, but it can’t be so strong that they can’t find their way back together.
I think one of the considerations has to be how long the hero and heroine were together. I think the longer they were together, the harder it is to break them up. Also, if they have kids (that they both know about), it would have to be a doozy of a reason to break them up. Also, you couldn’t let a lot of time pass before they saw each other again, because a hero would want to see his kids.
In the very first romance I wrote, the hero and heroine were cops. They broke up when he was accepted into the FBI, and he left her and their four kids. Um. I think I know why this one didn’t sell.
In a later version of the novel, I took away their kids and they split up because they lost a child. Heavy. And realistic. I do want to go back to that one, though.
Beneath the Surface
In Beneath the Surface, my September release from Samhain Publishing, I went through several reasons to break up Mallory and Adrian. It wasn’t easy. She’d loved him since he’d joined her parents’ archaeological dig when they were both in college. They were wild for each other and married young. Adrian was very dedicated to his job, and Mallory, who’d been raised by nomadic archaeologist parents, was ready for a home. That had to be a consideration. But was it bad enough to split them apart?
I toyed with the idea of her having a miscarriage when he was on a dig, and not telling him, but that didn’t make either of them very heroic.
I toyed with the Big Misunderstanding, but could that drive these two passionate, smart people apart?
So I ended up giving them both a reason to leave, his guilt, her resentment and frustration, and I gave them some time apart before they confronted each other. She’d walked away from every aspect of the life they’d shared, and he dove in head-first, determined to prove himself to her.
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In retrospect, perhaps archaeologist Mallory Reeves shouldn’t have delivered the divorce papers to her estranged husband mere weeks before her marriage to another man. She knew seeing Adrian again would stir up memories, but she didn’t expect so many of them to be good, not after the mess they both made three years ago.
She also didn’t expect to want to stay at the dig site on the Yucatan Peninsula. But the lure of the ancient ship and, yes, her sexy ex provide more of a draw than the white picket fence she thought she wanted.
Marine archaeologist Adrian Reeves has good reason to trust no one. His former partner—and former best friend—made off with his last archaeological find. And his wife left him, frustrated by his obsession for professional revenge.
Now both Mallory and his nemesis have returned, and it can’t be an accident that they’ve turned up in the middle of the most important excavation of his career. Seeing her again unearths old pain—and rekindles never-forgotten desire. Now he has to decide if he can trust Mallory again. More importantly, if he can trust himself with her.
What are your favorite romance themes? What’s your favorite reunion romance?


{ 3 comments… read them below or add one }
Welcome MJ! What an AWESOME cover! Who did the cover art for this one? It’s such a great, romantic cover!
:-)
Heather R.
Thanks, Heather! Natalie Winters did that cover. I LOVE it. I had it made into a purse, a tote, a mug…I’m surrounded with it!!!
Awesome! What are the next books you’re working on? Do you have more scheduled? This info is probably on your site, right? ;-) I’ve just not had time to go surfing to find it.
And some of my favorites are ‘hidden’ royals. Those who hide their identity to find love because they want to be loved for who they are. I have a few other favorites, but mostly I enjoy just about all, well all but those with kids. They are definitely hard for me to read. I have two of them myself (kids, not books with them) and the idea of making time for a man (as in dating) would be hard. And if I was married to him before and we’d split, there would have to be a SUPER reason for me to go back with him…kids or not. I just don’t see that as a good ‘escape’ romance. I want something that strikes my interest.
The ‘lost child’ aspect is also hard to read. I know there are tons of people who resent or whatever losing a child and take it out on their spouse and they split. But I would have to say that if they weren’t strong enough to endure that aspect before as a reader I’d be doubting their love and their ability to overcome other harsh realities of life. Just a personal preference for me, though.
Heather R.